A simple addition that makes a noticeable difference, daily.

My double rounded the corner. He was heading for the front doors! He was getting away! I gritted my teeth and tore around the corner after him and suddenly I stood face-to-face with him! "Who are you?", I panted "who?" The boy with my face gave a mocking smile, "I'm taking over your life, Monty", he said softly "and you can't stop me. "

The kind of thing that feels like a hidden gem.